Post by senshifullmoon on Jul 14, 2009 7:41:06 GMT -5
(first 2 chapters )
Tameria Chronicles - The king of twiiro
Original story and characters are copyright me
Chapter 1
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A ordinary day, in the bedroom of Chloe Tamara, a pretty ordinary teenage girl laid in bed as for the 4th time that morning her mother shouted her to get up, and she just groaned and made a kicking motion with her leg and swiped her arm across at the same time knocking the blankets off her. She then laid there trying to wake up enough before she got up groggily and proceeded to walk out of her room in a zombie state, her pyjama top half hanging off her right shoulder, she sat down at the table and looked at the toast sitting there waiting to be eaten through her half open eyes. With a total lack of enthusiasm she began eating away, chewing away slowly, school was such a pain, why they have to start so unhealthily early for was quite beyond her, finishing up and yawning, she went back to her bedroom and changed into her school uniform, before using the bathroom and brushing her teeth and brushing her tangled hair. If not for the Mallory school for young ladies strict dress code, Chloe probably would rarely look elegant, with her tomboyish nature, her looks were not such a high priority for her.
Looking at her watching and impatiently tapping her foot on the ground Rosalyn Tamara, was feeling frustrated at her daughter's lack of time keeping, and shouted out for her to get a move on or she be late for school. Rosalyn had fine long brown hair like her daughter but she was a lot different in other ways, time keeping being one of them. About to call again, she never got the chance as Chloe suddenly came running along saying "Chill mum, I'm ready - have I been late for school yet?" Rosalyn shook her head replying "Because I make sure of it..." Chloe grinned and grabbed her school bag and made her way to the door saying "Bye mum!". Rosalyn quickly replied "Bye dear, don't be late home" as Chloe disappeared out of the house.
As Chloe came out off her house she spotted her friend Nikki Lee a bit up the road and she shouted out "Nikkkiiiiiiii" waving madly and she ran up to her, Nikki turned and shyly smiled at her friend, she was't feeling so bold as Chloe as to broadcast to everyone within earshot, indeed she got nervous if she thought peoples attentions were on her. "Hi Chloe" Nikki replied at a normal volume as Chloe approached closer. "Late getting up again?" Nikki enquire, with a small smile. Chloe grinned and shrugged "Well they do insist on starting school early". Nikki giggled and jokingly replied "You mean there is a good time?" Chloe in mock look of seriousness "Nikki! I'm shocked! To think you've been leading me astray all these years!" Nikki while now laughing, nodded and replied "I know... I lead the whole school a stray...". Chloe laughed a little before saying "Come on, we better run else we'll both be late!"
It was 5 minutes later as they were running along, there was a low rumbling in the ground and a strong wind suddenly blew in both girls faces and they gasped for breath stopping still. Looking around things seemed strange, like a heat haze on the roads, only it was't nearly hot enough to be seeing this sort of a effect. Suddenly both girls knees gave way and they collapsed down on they fronts. Nikki laid there, not moving, seemingly unconcious as far as could be telled. Chloe was partially supporting herself with one arm, she felt sick and dizzy. She almost wished to be unconcious too, like Nikki, but something was telling her that it would be a bad idea. There was a blinding flash suddenly and Chloe clasped her eyes shut in pain, turning her head to face down in recall of the sudden and painful flash of light.
When Chloe openned her eyes again, she was shocked, she was no longer laying on the ground, where she had been. Soft cool feeling grass was now under her hands. Some way over to her right but in the direction her face was facing she could hear what sounded like the ocean, which was really strange because she lived no where near the sea. Yet she had been on her way to school, this should be a street yet there was grass under her. Chloe got onto her knees and glanced around, there was a thick wood behind her and sure enough the sea was washing back and forth not more than a hundred meters away. She could't take this all in suddenly and her head was wheeling, what was going on and suddenly a harsh voice fairly nearby spoke "Welcome the fatalis, welcome to your doom!"
Chapter 2
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Chloe barely had time to register that there was someone nearby before there was a axe striking down towards her, her eyes opened in horror, she was routed to the spot unable to move. It seemed inevitable that she would die in seconds, yet she had no time to think, no flashing of her life before her eyes, just utter surprise. Suddenly a multi edges rounded blade embedded itself into the arm of Chloe's attack, the suden pain being enough to divert the swing as the axe smashed into the ground barely a foot away. Running towards her from the woods was the most ruggegly handsome man Chloe had ever seen, or at least that was what she thought at that particular moment. Tall, dark haired, well built but not too musclely, in any other situation, she might of drooled looking at him, but at this particular moment - her heart was beating so fast she did't even react. The man pulled a bow off his shoulder and started to release arrows at her attacker who recalled from the hits yet was not going down. Chloe dared to look at her attacker and gasped in horror, grotesque appearance, dark green skin and looked like a bull crossed with a weight lifter, Chloe had no idea what on earth it was. The creature released a roar of frustration and crossed its arms in some deliberate manner and suddenly it was gone, if possible, Chloe's eyes widened even further, mean while the guy had gotten over to her. "Are you ok?" he asked, looking at her but Chloe never answered, everything had gotten to much for her, as her head span and her eyes closed, she fainted.
Sometime later Chloe stirred, there was a chirping noise going on and the light was getting dim. She wondered what was going on, where was she - why was she laying on the ground... her head was a jumble of thoughts whizzing around. Suddenly just as she was sitting up, Nikki sprang in view kneeling next to her and embracing her in a tight hug. Her shoulders shaking, Nikki cried as she held on and exclaimed "You're awake, I'm so glad, I was so scared!". Chloe was beweilded by her friends reaction, why would't she be ok and then her eyes focused on the surroundings - like a sledgehammer it suddenly came back and she gasped. She looked around but could't see anything other than Nikki, no guy, no monster... but she was still in this strange place.
"What happened? I think I hit my head... or at least it hurts, how did we get here?" Nikki asked Chloe puzzled, more hoping for a answer than expecting one. Chloe shook her head replying "I don't know... there was a flash of light and then we were here. I seem to remember... I don't know... something and a guy here before I fainted" she put a hand to her head as it throbbed like it did't want to remember anything. "I really don't know Nik... I'm not even sure if I imagined everything before I fainted..." she sighed, she wanted to know herself, be sure but she doubted herself. After all, why would this guy that saved them just abandom them to who knows what, that may be lurking in the dark of where ever they were now. Standing up slowly her legs felt wobbly like anything, it was so strange - but then this day could hardly be stranger it seemed to Chloe. Nikki hooked a arm around Chloe's after standing herself, for a sense of self-comfit more than anything and closed her eyes and breathed deeply in before exhaling. Opening her eyes again she said with a smile "Still, if we go somewhere after dying, I hope its as beautiful as this... or maybe we already died..." Though Chloe did't want to think that they had died, she did understand what her friend was saying, the place felt so right, so rich to her senses. If things were different she'd lay here on the beach in the day and just relax, go to sleep even, under a warm bathing sun... yet something was telling her it was far from being safe here.
Chloe looked at Nikki a moment before saying "I don't think we're on Earth any longer..." a thought suddenly popped into her head and she added "at least not the one we know..." she took a deep breath, it was hard for her to say it, it seemed so unreal to her. "Before I fainted, there was this.. this.. thing - monster! And it most definately was not a costome!" Chloe said, sure she must look as frightened as Nikki was. One thing was for sure though, sooner or later they needed to go somewhere - find somewhere to sleep, there had been a guy earlier, so surely there had to be others, some kind of people in this place. Surveying the area and seeing nothing she pouted and said "And not a taxi in sight when you need one!" It was so unexpected that Nikki could't help suddenly laughing, Chloe joined in too, it felt like the tension and anxiousness of the situation suddenly melted away.
Finally, Chloe said "Come on, shall we go this way?" indicating towards the woods leading in the opposite direction to what the sea was, Nikki shrugged and replied "Why not, we can't stay here forever". Chloe started walking off towards the direction they'd decided when Nikki called out "Um... what about our bags? Really Chloe, you're terrible!". Stopping in her tracks, Chloe flinched, she had honestly completely forgotten about the school bags- indeed school seemed a million years away. Turning round andgoing back for the bags, she grinned and said "Awww... can't use the excuse - I lost my homework in another world?!" Nikki shook her head in dispair but was smiling at the same time, she just wondered at times if Chloe would leave her head behind if it was't attached.
They started off again, walking at a casual pace, it was a pity they were't here with a guide, it'd be so much nicer. A wind started blowing gently from a easterly direction and both girls shivered, it was such a icy wind and the clouds were starting to bubble in a dark foamy manner. Things were certainly not looking good as they reached the beginning of the trees, luckily there seemed to be some kind of path not far from them. It was a rough and over grown path but certainly it had to be better than forcing their way through the forest. As they moved on down the path the wind was starting to get rough and it was getting darker all the time, Nikki prayed silently that they'd find shelter soon.
Tameria Chronicles - The king of twiiro
Original story and characters are copyright me
Chapter 1
------------
A ordinary day, in the bedroom of Chloe Tamara, a pretty ordinary teenage girl laid in bed as for the 4th time that morning her mother shouted her to get up, and she just groaned and made a kicking motion with her leg and swiped her arm across at the same time knocking the blankets off her. She then laid there trying to wake up enough before she got up groggily and proceeded to walk out of her room in a zombie state, her pyjama top half hanging off her right shoulder, she sat down at the table and looked at the toast sitting there waiting to be eaten through her half open eyes. With a total lack of enthusiasm she began eating away, chewing away slowly, school was such a pain, why they have to start so unhealthily early for was quite beyond her, finishing up and yawning, she went back to her bedroom and changed into her school uniform, before using the bathroom and brushing her teeth and brushing her tangled hair. If not for the Mallory school for young ladies strict dress code, Chloe probably would rarely look elegant, with her tomboyish nature, her looks were not such a high priority for her.
Looking at her watching and impatiently tapping her foot on the ground Rosalyn Tamara, was feeling frustrated at her daughter's lack of time keeping, and shouted out for her to get a move on or she be late for school. Rosalyn had fine long brown hair like her daughter but she was a lot different in other ways, time keeping being one of them. About to call again, she never got the chance as Chloe suddenly came running along saying "Chill mum, I'm ready - have I been late for school yet?" Rosalyn shook her head replying "Because I make sure of it..." Chloe grinned and grabbed her school bag and made her way to the door saying "Bye mum!". Rosalyn quickly replied "Bye dear, don't be late home" as Chloe disappeared out of the house.
As Chloe came out off her house she spotted her friend Nikki Lee a bit up the road and she shouted out "Nikkkiiiiiiii" waving madly and she ran up to her, Nikki turned and shyly smiled at her friend, she was't feeling so bold as Chloe as to broadcast to everyone within earshot, indeed she got nervous if she thought peoples attentions were on her. "Hi Chloe" Nikki replied at a normal volume as Chloe approached closer. "Late getting up again?" Nikki enquire, with a small smile. Chloe grinned and shrugged "Well they do insist on starting school early". Nikki giggled and jokingly replied "You mean there is a good time?" Chloe in mock look of seriousness "Nikki! I'm shocked! To think you've been leading me astray all these years!" Nikki while now laughing, nodded and replied "I know... I lead the whole school a stray...". Chloe laughed a little before saying "Come on, we better run else we'll both be late!"
It was 5 minutes later as they were running along, there was a low rumbling in the ground and a strong wind suddenly blew in both girls faces and they gasped for breath stopping still. Looking around things seemed strange, like a heat haze on the roads, only it was't nearly hot enough to be seeing this sort of a effect. Suddenly both girls knees gave way and they collapsed down on they fronts. Nikki laid there, not moving, seemingly unconcious as far as could be telled. Chloe was partially supporting herself with one arm, she felt sick and dizzy. She almost wished to be unconcious too, like Nikki, but something was telling her that it would be a bad idea. There was a blinding flash suddenly and Chloe clasped her eyes shut in pain, turning her head to face down in recall of the sudden and painful flash of light.
When Chloe openned her eyes again, she was shocked, she was no longer laying on the ground, where she had been. Soft cool feeling grass was now under her hands. Some way over to her right but in the direction her face was facing she could hear what sounded like the ocean, which was really strange because she lived no where near the sea. Yet she had been on her way to school, this should be a street yet there was grass under her. Chloe got onto her knees and glanced around, there was a thick wood behind her and sure enough the sea was washing back and forth not more than a hundred meters away. She could't take this all in suddenly and her head was wheeling, what was going on and suddenly a harsh voice fairly nearby spoke "Welcome the fatalis, welcome to your doom!"
Chapter 2
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Chloe barely had time to register that there was someone nearby before there was a axe striking down towards her, her eyes opened in horror, she was routed to the spot unable to move. It seemed inevitable that she would die in seconds, yet she had no time to think, no flashing of her life before her eyes, just utter surprise. Suddenly a multi edges rounded blade embedded itself into the arm of Chloe's attack, the suden pain being enough to divert the swing as the axe smashed into the ground barely a foot away. Running towards her from the woods was the most ruggegly handsome man Chloe had ever seen, or at least that was what she thought at that particular moment. Tall, dark haired, well built but not too musclely, in any other situation, she might of drooled looking at him, but at this particular moment - her heart was beating so fast she did't even react. The man pulled a bow off his shoulder and started to release arrows at her attacker who recalled from the hits yet was not going down. Chloe dared to look at her attacker and gasped in horror, grotesque appearance, dark green skin and looked like a bull crossed with a weight lifter, Chloe had no idea what on earth it was. The creature released a roar of frustration and crossed its arms in some deliberate manner and suddenly it was gone, if possible, Chloe's eyes widened even further, mean while the guy had gotten over to her. "Are you ok?" he asked, looking at her but Chloe never answered, everything had gotten to much for her, as her head span and her eyes closed, she fainted.
Sometime later Chloe stirred, there was a chirping noise going on and the light was getting dim. She wondered what was going on, where was she - why was she laying on the ground... her head was a jumble of thoughts whizzing around. Suddenly just as she was sitting up, Nikki sprang in view kneeling next to her and embracing her in a tight hug. Her shoulders shaking, Nikki cried as she held on and exclaimed "You're awake, I'm so glad, I was so scared!". Chloe was beweilded by her friends reaction, why would't she be ok and then her eyes focused on the surroundings - like a sledgehammer it suddenly came back and she gasped. She looked around but could't see anything other than Nikki, no guy, no monster... but she was still in this strange place.
"What happened? I think I hit my head... or at least it hurts, how did we get here?" Nikki asked Chloe puzzled, more hoping for a answer than expecting one. Chloe shook her head replying "I don't know... there was a flash of light and then we were here. I seem to remember... I don't know... something and a guy here before I fainted" she put a hand to her head as it throbbed like it did't want to remember anything. "I really don't know Nik... I'm not even sure if I imagined everything before I fainted..." she sighed, she wanted to know herself, be sure but she doubted herself. After all, why would this guy that saved them just abandom them to who knows what, that may be lurking in the dark of where ever they were now. Standing up slowly her legs felt wobbly like anything, it was so strange - but then this day could hardly be stranger it seemed to Chloe. Nikki hooked a arm around Chloe's after standing herself, for a sense of self-comfit more than anything and closed her eyes and breathed deeply in before exhaling. Opening her eyes again she said with a smile "Still, if we go somewhere after dying, I hope its as beautiful as this... or maybe we already died..." Though Chloe did't want to think that they had died, she did understand what her friend was saying, the place felt so right, so rich to her senses. If things were different she'd lay here on the beach in the day and just relax, go to sleep even, under a warm bathing sun... yet something was telling her it was far from being safe here.
Chloe looked at Nikki a moment before saying "I don't think we're on Earth any longer..." a thought suddenly popped into her head and she added "at least not the one we know..." she took a deep breath, it was hard for her to say it, it seemed so unreal to her. "Before I fainted, there was this.. this.. thing - monster! And it most definately was not a costome!" Chloe said, sure she must look as frightened as Nikki was. One thing was for sure though, sooner or later they needed to go somewhere - find somewhere to sleep, there had been a guy earlier, so surely there had to be others, some kind of people in this place. Surveying the area and seeing nothing she pouted and said "And not a taxi in sight when you need one!" It was so unexpected that Nikki could't help suddenly laughing, Chloe joined in too, it felt like the tension and anxiousness of the situation suddenly melted away.
Finally, Chloe said "Come on, shall we go this way?" indicating towards the woods leading in the opposite direction to what the sea was, Nikki shrugged and replied "Why not, we can't stay here forever". Chloe started walking off towards the direction they'd decided when Nikki called out "Um... what about our bags? Really Chloe, you're terrible!". Stopping in her tracks, Chloe flinched, she had honestly completely forgotten about the school bags- indeed school seemed a million years away. Turning round andgoing back for the bags, she grinned and said "Awww... can't use the excuse - I lost my homework in another world?!" Nikki shook her head in dispair but was smiling at the same time, she just wondered at times if Chloe would leave her head behind if it was't attached.
They started off again, walking at a casual pace, it was a pity they were't here with a guide, it'd be so much nicer. A wind started blowing gently from a easterly direction and both girls shivered, it was such a icy wind and the clouds were starting to bubble in a dark foamy manner. Things were certainly not looking good as they reached the beginning of the trees, luckily there seemed to be some kind of path not far from them. It was a rough and over grown path but certainly it had to be better than forcing their way through the forest. As they moved on down the path the wind was starting to get rough and it was getting darker all the time, Nikki prayed silently that they'd find shelter soon.